(link points to unavailable page, so these sentences were made-up)
1. I enjoy reading books it helps me relax after work
2. My friend lives in Japan, she teaches English there
3. Do you like to travel I want to visit Europe next year
Issues:
Sentence 1 – Missing a full stop or semicolon between two independent clauses.
Sentence 2 – Comma splice: two independent clauses joined by a comma instead of a period or conjunction.
Sentence 3 – Missing question mark after the first question; needs separation between the question and the statement.
Corrected:
I enjoy reading books. It helps me relax after work.
My friend lives in Japan. She teaches English there.
Do you like to travel? I want to visit Europe next year.
Explanation
Using correct punctuation separates complete thoughts, making the meaning clearer and easier to follow.
