Here are some sentences I found on Review Your Writing Discussion in Unit 4 of the ESL001 course
I wake up around 6 am everyday and I find my phone and use it for a few minute . Then I brush my teeth and wash my face , then I study my lessons and have a breakfast and then take a bath . Next I go to my class and then come back to the home .
In this sentences ,she didn't use correct commas and full stop correctly .For example, in this paragraph she joined many actions in one long sentence without clear separation and also wrote "a few minute" instead of "a few minutes" and used "everyday" instead of "every day". And I found another thing is : Commas are useful after transition words like Then, Next, and After that, to help show the sequence of actions. Full stops separate complete thoughts and avoid confusing run-on sentences. And she wrote ( come back to home) ,but we don't need proposition ( to ) , we say ( come back home ,go home ) so, I changed it .
Here is my correction;
This is how I would punctuate the description to improve text clarity:
I wake up around 6 a.m. every day, and I find my phone and use it for a few minutes. Then, I brush my teeth and wash my face. After that, I study my lessons, have breakfast, and then take a bath. Next, I go to my class and then come back home.
