Everyday I go to work at 8am I like to walk because it’s not far from my house sometimes I stop at the coffee shop on the way.
This paragraph includes several ideas, but the writer didn’t use proper punctuation to separate them. There are no full stops, and the transitions like "sometimes" should be followed by commas. The lack of punctuation makes the sentence hard to read and understand.
Here is the corrected version with proper punctuation:
Every day, I go to work at 8 a.m. I like to walk because it’s not far from my house. Sometimes, I stop at the coffee shop on the way.
Explanation:
I added a comma after "Every day" because it’s an introductory phrase.
I added a full stop after "8 a.m." to separate the complete thought.
I added a comma after "Sometimes" to separate the introductory adverb.
These changes make the writing clearer, easier to follow, and more professional
