Here are some sentences I found in the ESL001 writing review forum:
Original Sentences:
I wake up around 6 am everyday and I find my phone and use it for a few minute . Then I brush my teeth and wash my face , then I study my lessons and have a breakfast and then take a bath . Next I go to my class and then come back to the home .
Revised Version:
I wake up around 6 a.m. every day, and I find my phone and use it for a few minutes. Then, I brush my teeth and wash my face. After that, I study my lessons, have breakfast, and then take a bath. Next, I go to my class and then come back home.
