My observation

My observation

by Godwin Nyenke -
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The original description had poor punctuation, using only one comma and one full stop despite containing several sentences. To improve clarity, full stops were added at the end of each sentence, and commas were inserted after introductory words like “usually” and “next.” This corrected version breaks the long run-on sentence into shorter, clearer sentences, making the routine easier to read and understand.